Smoke was rising from the fire; thick smoke, heavy with pitch and tar. He felt like he was choking on it, suffocating,
The campervan, standing in the abandoned barn like a solid, multi-coloured animal, was more familiar to Meggie than any of the houses where she and Mo had lived
He has a haunted look: purple, curled lips and dark shadows for eyes.
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